zero to hero infomercial

So it took a while but I finally collected a bunch of training montages and started cutting them together. I started trying to make a work out video, which ended up being about 20 mins long. I realized right away, this would take up about the whole term to cut together, voice over and edit properly. So in the interest of time, I opted to trying an infomercial format. This is the preliminary edit (kind of like a story board). I want to get someone else to do the voice over, since I think my voice lacks that commercial quality (and it's embarrassing to listen to over and over while I edit the video). I'm also going to do the final cut in after affects so I can bring in some cool titles and color charts. I'm definitely trying to ramp up a dork factor with this short, hope it works.